Thread:Miguelcamino/@comment-1038387-20160814125601

Hi! Thanks for helping us out. A couple of issues and points of advice, though.
 * Character bios should be in the past sense.
 * Write in-universe. Avoid "they were seen".
 * Observe proper English grammar. Some of your sentence contruction is way off. I know not everyone is a native speaker (I'm not) but we're volunteers... not your English teacher.
 * Characters, locations, etc. in the history section should be linked.
 * The pagequotes NEED to have a link to the full pagename in the speaker field, and the source field needs to be filled out.
 * "Metahuman" refers to a specific sort of person. Much like a mutant in Marvel. Not everyone with powers is a metahuman. DC hasn't always used it consistently, but we prefer to do.
 * Don't describe everyone. "An artifact called a 'scarab'". A group of metahumans called 'the Brotherhood of Evil'". The Brotherhood of Evil is well established.
 * Character bios don't need to be play-by-plays. Just a general write-up. As an example: when two characters fight, don't describe all their punches. Just say they fight.
 * The first time of activating of Jaime's armor didn't turn him into the superhero Blue Beetle. It just gave him the armor. He didn't become the superhero Blue Beetle until he decided to become a hero. 