Thread:Stoop Davy Dave/@comment-1038387-20130614155902/@comment-1038387-20130614224021

Really, it would be helpful if you followed these: Featured Characters: Supporting Characters: Villains:
 * That Black X/Ace and his boss go to the restaurant isn't trivia. it's part of the plot summary.
 * Appearance should be added like this:
 * Batu
 * Colonel Whatzit
 * Gunther the Nazi Clown Spy


 * Those dates in your plot summaries - are they explicitly mentioned or is it speculation? If the latter, there's no need to add it.
 * About speculation - leave it out altogether please. It's highly subjective.
 * Though we don't strive towards an absolutely formal writing style, things like "Hombre!" in the middle of a summary are just a little bit too informal.

I really wish that you follow up on these, as right now, we've got to clean up after you every time.