Thread:Stoop Davy Dave/@comment-220364-20140628163905/@comment-220364-20140628173844

Also...
 * should only be used to create a new paragraph in bulleted points. Otherwise give it 2 carriage returns - one to end the paragraph and one to create a blank line - and start the nex paragraph.
 * While I left them, a paragraph shouldn't start with a dash. Much less a double dash.
 * The feature does not need to go into the story title. In most cases it shouldn't if the feature is not going to be inside the quotes as part of the story title.