Thread:Roscoe Coaltrane/@comment-37223231-20190309193241/@comment-37223231-20190323212921

I'm on it. It's the least I could do!

Notes: Overall, it's pretty amazing. Better than my Jesse page! (Sorry there are so many notes, I'm a brutal editor.)
 * You definitely have more of a flair than me. I like the opening sentence.
 * Not positive, but I think that the "was," after "Guardianship of the Universe" should be a "were"
 * "Persuit" should be "Pursuit."
 * I'm unsure what the final sentence in the second paragraph means. "...led to the prophesy and crisis of Blackest Night..." Is "prophesy," supposed to be a verb or a noun? If noun, then it is technically "Prophecy." Grammar sucks, right?
 * The starting sentence of the second paragraph under "Breaching the Barrier..." is slightly confusing. Maybe it could read:"It was not known at the time how..."
 * "Krona was killed by Hal Jordan's Willpower." A bit vague. MAybe more detail? (Funny that I say that after I made God's death very vague!)
 * Under "Wrath of the First Lantern," "The Great Heart," is linked in red. Earlier, it was just in bold. Intentional?
 * Notes:Pre-52 New Earth. Opened has two Ns there. Unless it's a Canadian spelling thing, (again grammar sucks,) it's a typo.