Thread:Tupka217/@comment-4324417-20131126092154/@comment-1038387-20131126120056

I don't read current comics. Well, Hawkeye over on the other side, but nothing big. I just saw bits, and I wonder if exposing Dick's identity makes people connect Bruce Wayne to Batman.

The language of your synopses looks good. Structure could be better (try to make pragraphs equal length, if possible) but that depends on whether the story allows it.