Thread:Tupka217/@comment-27802510-20160215153624/@comment-1038387-20160215155248

The problem was the wording. Bolding mine.
 * Midnighter has taken on the new nickname "M", as seen in his 'dating profile' in his newer solo comic, in which he and Apollo are not together and he is instead looking to see other, different men. (In the new 'Midnighter' (2015) series)"
 * The 'Midnighter' and 'Grayson' comics are tied together, in ways that Midnighter and Agent 37/Grayson are often seen either fighting each other, or teaming up with one another.
 * never use "seen". It's out of universe. While out-of-universe is allowed in notes and trivia, it should be avoided in phrases like this.
 * "his newer solo comic" is confusing, as the Midnighter of Prime Earth has no older series.
 * similarly, that's not how references work. First off, linking should be done to the actual series, Midnighter Vol 2, like this: Linking is a fundamental part of wiki editing.
 * addendum to the same point: "it happened in series X" is too broad; include the issue in which it first appeared, like so:
 * Overall point of criticism on the first point: that sentence is way too long.
 * the entire second point, again, linking. But also, this is more of a trivia point for the series than the characters.