Thread:Hatebunny/@comment-29342734-20161215185517/@comment-29342734-20161222220428

Thanks for the detailed response. As for being aggressively critical, I don't consider your comments to be that. I've suffered through code reviews where people criticize you for using a "while loop" instead of a "for loop", among other things.

This is valuable information for me, certainly better than "Your writing is horrible and you're an idiot!" :-)

This is a new style of writing for me which is why I started with minor characters and locations. The only way I'll get better is if I get kind souls to critique it. I want to begin adding synopses but also wanted to start with small steps.

I'll go back and make changes based on the comments I've received. I'm just going to wait a few days until I do.

Again, many thanks.