Thread:Tupka217/@comment-3567304-20140302180816/@comment-1038387-20140302181757

The short version is "too many grammatical errors to fix".

Long version:
 * It's entirely out-of universe. This is worse than all the other things.
 * A female requires "her", not "his".
 * "history" and "story" are two different things.
 * "between others" is not English.
 * "chose to remain".

I'm assuming these are all translation errors from PT to EN. As pointed out below, multiple times, we demand a reasonable level of English.