Thread:Tupka217/@comment-34620267-20180401185145/@comment-1038387-20180401193307

To elaborate on all issuesL
 * 1) The section should be written in past tense. Preferably mostly simple past.
 * 2) You did not use any links to other pages. That's not helpful, because who is Amanda Waller and what is her Sansara Project?
 * 3) You did not use any section headers (or rather, an incorrect form) and the text was mostly linear play by play rather than structured summary.
 * 4) Character bios should be a concise overview, with 5-10 lines per storyline. A more detailed summary of events can go in the issue summary.

Some more notes:
 * 1) write numbers out in full. Don't write "2 weeks later".
 * 2) Use sources with tags, so people can see which issue you've taken it from
 * 3) Keep the section in-universe. "hinted to be the Justice League" is not in-universe.

Like I said, these are all style issues, that cannot simply be fixed in the existing text.