Thread:Queso6p7/@comment-1387629-20120708040847

Pagename doesn't work in the real name tab, brackets around first appearances don't work and Lord Battle is something of a president but isn't a president.

Further than that you've created a pretty skeleton page with a somewhat low quality image. Maybe it would be have more presentable with more appearances, in the future I would wait before immediately creating a character page like this.

And as always provide sources and in this case always preview before hitting publish. 