Thread:Tomob/@comment-220364-20140907230414/@comment-220364-20140907231850

A few things:
 * 1) "Human" is normally not included in the AlienRace field. There are catgoeries for Human/Alien Hybrid and Human/Demon Hybrid characters, but the is likely not going to be one for "Human/Homo Magi" characters as it would be redundant with the Homo Magi category.
 * 2) Changing the PlaceOfBirth field needs to be cited, especially if you are adding that type of information into the History.
 * 3) Preview your edits before up submit them. It will help you pick up the broken code and templates before your version of the article goes live.
 * 4) It looks like you are lifting passages from other sites. There are points that stick out where you haven't even tried to reword things.
 * 5) You were given clear instructions on how to cite references below. It's disturbing that you didn't bother to follow them in the first place. then more or less fixed them. And then preceded to break the for4matting of the template to list the issue name, number, and if needed volume.