Thread:Hatebunny/@comment-29342734-20161215185517

Hi, Sometime back I asked you for guidelines on writing synopses. After reading through a lot of comic pages, I decided to start smaller. I've created several pages for locations and minor characters and would like to ask a favor.

Could you look at some (not all) of the following pages and give me a critique on the writing?


 * Smith Farm
 * Keystone Saloon
 * Jimmy Crew (Prime Earth)
 * Tatsuo Hasigawa (Prime Earth)
 * Vincent Scagnetti (Prime Earth)

Any feedback would be welcome. If you can't, or don't wish to provide feedback, I understand.

Thanks,

Hank 