Thread:Kyletheobald/@comment-29342734-20161217170837

Hi Kyle,

I've been adding pages for minor characters and locations. I'm hoping you could give me some feedback on the writing on the pages; specifically, if there is a way for me to improve.

Some pages:

Jimmy Crew (Prime Earth) Marissa Rennie (Prime Earth) Keystone Saloon Tatsuo Hasigawa (Prime Earth)

I would appreciate any feedback; however, if you can't do this, I understand. 