Thread:Tupka217/@comment-34660281-20180223124935/@comment-1038387-20180223134310

The most important thing: conciseness. A character bio should be a brief overview per storyline. 10 to 20 lines. Not play by play summaries of issues. That's what the issue summaries are for. If we did that for every issue, the article would be so long it's unreadable.

Additionally, you opened with "Oliver and Dinah appeared in the docks". Characters don't appear in the docks, they show up there. They travel there. Or rather, their inversigation into X led them there. "Appearing" is out of universe.