Thread:JayAaerow/@comment-1038387-20140728090415/@comment-1038387-20140728235624

Also, there's no need for all the woods. It should be written in past simple or past perfect - it's in the past and it's finished. "She would then be X" is a different tense all together - the past future. It describes events that happen or might happen in the period after the past - the past's future. Which may or may not be the present. Or the future. Either way, don't use it.