Thread:Kyletheobald/@comment-29342734-20161217170837/@comment-18172179-20161217220910

The only page I notice could use some work is the Jimmy Crew one. All characters' history section must be written in past tense. I notice you've done this with Marissa and Tatsuo's pages, but not with Jimmy. Maybe perhaps the two are deceased? In any case, past tense is the general way to proceed.

Also, is Jimmy the real name? Generally we proceed with real names for character pages and Jimmy could as well be James, unless stated otherwise. It's understandable though if there is no mention of it in the comics.

Finally, Crew's page has no sources or references in the text as the others have. Make sure to include them.

All things considered, it's a work well done.