Thread:KillRayne 44/@comment-25737724-20150109030806

Can you review the comments Hatebunny made on your last Swampthing update? I noticed several of your updates are out of universe, such as Red_Robin_Vol_1_1. I used to make that same mistake as well :) The below wisdom was passed on to me by SforHope  The problem with your edit was that you described the story as a reader. Your first sentence was "In a black and white flashback, we see...". When writing a synopsis, you must do it from the perspective of a historian inside the DC universe. You must write as a reporter inside the comic would do it. The use of in this issue; in the previous comic; In this flashback or we see is incorrect.

The template points it out:

Articles should be written from an "in-universe" perspective as if they were written by a historian living in the DC Universe. Hope that helps 