Thread:Xeno Fighter 451/@comment-1038387-20150208022145/@comment-1038387-20150208022412

Also, think of your writing style. On Scream Queen, you used "It was then", twice. That's not really good English, and if it were passable, don't use it twice. The same goes for Huntress - you started two paragraphs with "They then". Avoid "then" as much as possible.