Thread:Tupka217/@comment-26039971-20171123165450/@comment-1038387-20171123172430

Okay, I read that. And I'm afraid I'm going to have to revert that. Yes, you can write a history section summarizing the actions of the subject. But it has to be past tense, be a concise overview (and not an play-by-play), have a clear structure, and most of all, be written in proper English. That's mostly a collection of English words, not actually English. It's "English as she is spoke".