Thread:Byfield/@comment-1292580-20140907234850/@comment-220364-20140908003351


 * 1) Bullshit. You have phrases identical to the Wikipedia article imbedded in your text. See your wall for the examples.
 * 2) Removing the place of birth may be justified at this point. But the rest of the changes are not. Especially with point 1 in the mix.
 * 3) Your change to AlienRace to "Human/Homo-Magi" from "Homo-Magi" is wrong. Period.
 * 4) You should have been doing it from the get go on the article. Not doing a massive edit then fiddling with them. You still have the problem that sections of your text are plagiarized from Wikipedia.