Thread:N8THGR852/@comment-28096636-20180515192036/@comment-27892537-20180711174526

Ah, I see what the project was now. Nice, I like this sort of thing when done with accurate information. Speaking of accurate information, there is a tweak you need to make, so I hope you can edit the article.

Ray did not gain the power to grow as a result of Zero Hour and becoming de-aged. That ability was the result of Ray and several other characters being irradiated by the the Genesis Wave during the Genesis event. Ray first displayed these new growing powers in Teen Titans Vol 2 13. This information should be included / the article should be fixed so that it does not give inaccurate information by claiming Atom gained the powers during Zero Hour.

In addition to correcting misinformation, there are a few other edits I believe would better the article.

For Blue Beetle, you give this sentence: "Though he first started fighting beside them in issue #50 of the series, he didn’t receive an invitation to join them until #61." The way the sentence is phrased could seem to imply that the Teen Titans were making Jaime wait or that they were too good for him at first or something. I don't know. Anyway, I think it would be better if you included the word "official" between "an" and "invitation" so that it reads "...he didn't receive an official invitation until #61."

For CM3, you should really note that he was a Titan in two other incarnations. Sure, he first joined the second TT incarnation and later left when the team disbanded, but he was also a member of two other incarnations of the group. He was a member of Titans L.A., which formed in Titans Secret Files and Origins Vol 1 2 and operated afterward for a short while before disbanding. In addition, Freddy was a member during "The Missing Year," when the group had a rotational roster.

As for Green Lantern, while the team is revealed to have disbanded off-panel after New Titans #130, the actual story that they disbanded occurred in Titans Secret Files and Origins Vol 1 1. I think it would be nice for that information to be listed. It definitely adds more accuracy.

The writing itself is easy enough to read, so it's a fine article. But I do think it could be improved with the noted revisions.