Thread:Tupka217/@comment-34853-20180906154858/@comment-1038387-20180906155904

I mostly did it because of the incorrectly formatted (and irrelevant) quote and that awkward sentence " It is an attempt to steal a painting from this collection that brings Batman into contact with Everywhere Man.", which I only now realize was already there. Also, it's not an improvement per se. A bio should be written chronologically from the perspective of the subject, whilst both the original and your expansion are a summary of the episode. I'll restore parts of it, but it's still not really good.