Follow Xebelians Tupka217 You really need to work on your sentence structure. Loading editor 05:28, December 28, 2018 Quote More History Done Save changes Preview Cancel Tupka217 And for f... use the simple past. There's no reason to use the conditional perfect. Putting "would" in every sentence is just plain wrong. Loading editor 15:33, December 28, 2018 Quote More History Done Save changes Preview Cancel Sypherpol Hey, I cleaned up like you wanted. Sorry of my prose is a little outdated. Plus I don't get where this is coming from, since you never complained about most of the other pages I made. Loading editor Edited by Sypherpol 15:50, December 28, 2018 Quote More History Done Save changes Preview Cancel Tupka217 If I didn't complain, I missed it. It's not outdated prose. You place periods where they don't belong, you use weird tenses... that was never correct. Loading editor 16:15, December 28, 2018 Quote More History Done Save changes Preview Cancel Loading editor Reply Preview Give Kudos to this message You've given this message Kudos! See who gave Kudos to this message Retrieved from "https://dc.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:556047" Community content is available under CC-BY-SA unless otherwise noted.