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  • You really need to work on your sentence structure.

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    • And for f... use the simple past. There's no reason to use the conditional perfect. Putting "would" in every sentence is just plain wrong.

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    • Hey, I cleaned up like you wanted. Sorry of my prose is a little outdated. Plus I don't get where this is coming from, since you never complained about most of the other pages I made.

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    • If I didn't complain, I missed it.

      It's not outdated prose. You place periods where they don't belong, you use weird tenses... that was never correct.

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